Hello? Long time no seen. Do you know how much I love to eat you? I really love to eat you. When I try to eat you, you always welcome me with cool and sweet smell. It makes me feel happy. And when I eat you, you are really soft and sweet. When you melt in my mouth, it makes me really really cool and happy. Even sometimes you make me comfortable.
I especially like you when you are with a chocolate syrup. You are really cool, and sweet. You change your taste every time. Sometimes strawberry, vanilla, and even taste of fruits! So I think it's really fun and also make me interesting. I can see new image of you everyday!
Not only in hot summer, but also in cold winter I meet you. Because you are so delicious. Strangely, I'm more happy when I meet you in winter than I meet you in summer. Even if it's too cold in winter I really want to eat you. You make me feel like I'm in a North Pole. But I can not live without you. :)
However, you sometimes make me sick. If I eat you too fast, I have a headache. And if I eat you too much, I have a stomachache. So I should eat only 1 of you in one day. Also if I eat you too much, I can get a weight.ㅠㅜ So I'm sad that I can not eat you as much as I want.
Anyway, I wish I meet you soon. I want you to spread chocolate syrup on yourself when I meet you. Good-bye ice cream~~
Thursday, Agust 10th, 2012.
From Na In
Hi. Your writing TA Sohyeon here.
ReplyDeleteYou talk about a lot of different things separately, which makes your essay a clear read. I like this one and I like ice cream with chocolate syrup as well. Good work!
This is a good ode. Try to personify ice cream more by giving it human qualities.
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